DogLegPilot's Reviews

[Clock Mouse]

A decent first

You had some really bizarre virtual camera work at the beginning. It made for some choppy cuts. What should have been one zoom was kind of split up. I actually thought the use of the morphing tween on the mouse was kind of humorous. It seems like you animated by changing the position of stationary objects. That's a good start, anyway. That ought to give you some experience with the frame timings when it's time for movie-clipping body parts and stuff. Yay!

MegapiemanPHD responds:

Thanks. It was suposed to be a zoom but i could never get it to work right.

[Where's my cat?]

Predictable

When I saw the arched eyebrows, I knew that an immediate gun death would soon follow. The pacing could use work. Too many intervals of absolutely nothing happening. If the gag is just going to be a cat being shot and burning, the cartoon should be accordingly short. Those gaps of nothing are what will deter a lot of people from wanting to finish a cartoon.

Hessifer responds:

I completely agree with everything in this review. I'm just practicing so I can get on to something actually thought out but not have it look like shit. Also you're full of shit. Years later I'm still laughing at this.

[Reverie: an odd sim date]

Fun stuff, it just looks like you could use a bool or something to keep track of whether the music has been toggled on or off. It's possible to overlap several instances of the background music right now since the "sound on" button doesn't get disabled upon click.

[Scrap Metal]

Awesome! I liked that Boris Binker was actually Smithy in tank form......or is it just uncanny? it's nice that you can sequence 10 rounds at once - i've played too many r/p/c where you choose one round at a time (alex kidd, the monkey kombat crap from monkey island, etc)

DarkTimmy responds:

HA! So glad you liked the game. I really appreciate your time and the nice comment! Thank you! Best, -Tim

[The House]

The fish's dialog box is extending past the bottom of the stage. I reached a point where I couldn't respond because of this and got stuck. This was in Google Chrome. The graphics are awesome; I love your 3D effect.

[Organ Reaper Returns]

I'm glad you did this!

Wow. You did an awesome job with Organ Reaper. I like the surging bassline beginning at :34. And I think overlaying several string parts was interesting. The melody you revised starting at 2:00 is also pretty nice.

zlarke responds:

Means a lot that you liked it. Had fun making it :p

[Dwelling of Doom - SQ Cover]

Nostalgic and to the heart of the matter

This song, to me, was always synonymous with "Game Genie." I never knew what combination of crystals and body parts I needed to cause a mansion to appear. You have very nicely summed up my frustration. You orchestrated my death march into what I didn't realize was water. I....I love you.